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Manuscript Critique:
Elizabeth Law

Open to: Middle Grade or Young Adult Novels

Word Limit: Please check on projects more than 75,000 words

What You’ll Submit: Your middle grade or young adult novel manuscript.

What You’ll Get: A 5–7 page editorial letter speaking to the manuscript’s strengths and areas for development, with advice and questions to help guide your next draft. Elizabeth will also provide a brief opinion on the manuscript’s potential in the current market and help you position it for an agent or publisher. A 30-minute follow up consult is also included so you can ask questions and discuss next steps.

Pricing:
Loft manuscript critique consists of a flat base price, plus a per word fee. You can enter your word count below and the system will calculate your price. 
  • $500 (base price) + 2.5 cents/word

Turnaround: 3 weeks


Elizabeth Law Manuscript Critique

Class Level: Word

Base Price: $500.00
Manuscript Critique (Base Price + 2.5 cents/word)

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Elizabeth Law has more than 20 years experience in children’s and young adult publishing, first as an Editor at Viking Children’s Books and Puffin Books, then later as Associate Publisher at Simon and Schuster Books for Young Readers and as Publisher at Egmont USA. Elizabeth has edited 8 New York Times bestselling titles and many American Library Association Notable Books and Best Books for Young Adults. Among the authors she has edited and published are Adam Rapp, Allen Zadoff, Dan Gutman, Holly Black, Tony diTerlizzi, Andrew Clements, Malorie Blackman, Hilary Knight, G. Brian Karas, Micol Ostow, Ilsa J. Bick, and Michael Grant.


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Manuscript Critique Editors

Who do I work with? 

The best way to review what you'd get working with each editor is to review their specific page, but here is a summary of what each editor offers with general pricing. If you would like to contact an editor with specific questions before purchasing, email manuscripts@loft.org and we will forward your questions to them.

Prose: Fiction & Nonfiction
  • Ellen Akins: Fiction & Memoir Manuscript Coaching ($2,100)
  • Lesley Arimah: Short Stories ($300 + 5 cents/word)
  • Ben Barnhart: Fiction (short stories and novels); Nonfiction; YA and Middle-Grade Fiction ($250 + 1.5 cents/word)
  • Anitra Budd: Fiction and Nonfiction ($250 + 1.75 cents/word)
  • Patricia Weaver Francisco: Short and Long Prose, Fiction and Nonfiction ($300 + 1.5 cents/word)
  • Erin Hart: Crime Fiction, Historical Fiction—Short or Novel-Length; Query Letters ($150 + 1.5 cents/word)
  • Nicole Helget: Literary Fiction, Short Story collections, Historical Fiction, Genre Fiction (Western, Fantasy, Military, etc.), Literary Nonfiction, Essay collections, Memoir, Young Adult, and Middle Grade ($500 + 2.5 cents/word)
  • Heather McPherson: Book-Length Creative Nonfiction (including memoir, family history, essay, literary journalism, etc.) ($250 + 1.25 cents/word)
  • Lyda Morehouse: Book-Length Science Fiction and Fantasy ($250 + $1.75 cents/word)
  • Esther Porter: Short, Long, or Novel-Length Fiction or Nonfiction ($300 + 2.5 cents/word)
  • Kathryn Savage: MFA application personal statements, residency and fellowship personal statements, short fiction, flash fiction, and prose poems ($300 + 2 cents/word)
  • Sarah Stonich: Short, Long, or Novel-Length Fiction or Nonfiction ($300 + 1.25 cents/word) or Query Letters ($105)
  • Stanley Trollip: Crime Fiction—Short or Novel-Length ($100 + 1.75 cents/word) or Query Letters ($110)
Screen- and Playwriting
  • Cristina Pippa: Short or Feature-length Screenplays and Plays ($50 + $3.50/page); Screenplay Treatment ($210)
  • Sarah Stonich: Screenplay Critique ($400 + 3.50/page)
Poetry
  • Kathryn Kysar: Poetry Manuscripts ($100 + $12.50/page), Marketing Plan ($560)
  • Jude Nutter: Poetry Manuscripts ($100 + $17.50/page)
Children's and Young Adult
  • Molly Beth Griffin: Picture Books ($112)
  • Elizabeth Law: Middle Grade or Young Adult Novels ($500 + 2.5 cents/word)
  • Carrie Mesrobian: Young Adult Novels (contemporary/realistic) ($250 + 1.5 cents/word)
  • Kurtis Scaletta: Early Chapter Books (ages 7–10), Middle Grade Novels (ages 8–12) ($100 + 1.25 cents/word)
Offerings for Teens